批判危害性的框架
总共写十七个句子.
第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责.
第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果.
第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来.
第一段
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, the painful and frustrating somebody has not only indulged into insidious and poisonous but also ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but ought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, somebody does sth, doing sth, which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.(3)It goes without saying that phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our serious concerns more than .(4)Undoubtedly, the consequences resulting from this phenomenon seem to be disastrous to our individual, family and social survival and harmonious development.
第二段
(1)why do we lay emphasis on this?
(2)To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when A is argued, it is B that is meant. A 和B 是反义词，或者是从大到小的关系
(3) Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened.
(4) To begin with,主题not only does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
(5) In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with our efforts to build up a harmonious society and cause social disturbance and deterioration.
(6) Nothing is as disastrous as主题to impose on our family financial burdens and induce the heightened concern on our parents.
(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .
(8) According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.
(9) If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .
第三段
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
(1) From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of 主题, but how we can prevent it from getting worse. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect . (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
消极的现象:
热点一 网络游戏
第一段
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, the painful and frustrating somebody has not only indulges into insidious and poisonous internet games but also stays up until midnight, which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the pale students can not concentrate what the the teacher says， falling asleep, which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.(3)It goes without saying that phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our serious concerns more than internet games. (4)Undoubtedly, the consequences resulting from this phenomenon seem to be disastrous to our individual, family and social survival and harmonious development.
第二段
(1) why do we lay emphasis on this?
(2) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when the convenience brought by computers is argued, it is internet games that is meant.
(3) Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened.
(4) To begin with, internet games not only does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
(5) In addition, nothing is more harmful than internet games to contradict with our efforts to build up a harmonious society and cause social disturbance and deterioration.
(6) Nothing is as disastrous as internet games to impose on our family financial burdens and induce the heightened concern on our parents.
(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .
(8) According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced internet games will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.
(9) If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our children.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of internet games, but how we can prevent it from getting worse. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect our children. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
热点二 破坏文物
图画描述了很多游人在游玩和照相，在天安门广场游玩时，在吐口香糖，乱扔废弃物，广场上充满了污渍
第一段
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, but also ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, , which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.(3)It goes without saying that phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our serious concerns more than destroying the cultural relics . 4)Undoubtedly, the consequences resulting from this phenomenon seem to be disastrous to our individual, family and social survival and harmonious development.
第二段
(1) why do we lay emphasis on this?
(2) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when tourism is argued, it is destroying the cultural relics that is meant.
(3) Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened.
(4) To begin with, destroying the cultural relics not only does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
(5) In addition, nothing is more harmful than destroying the cultural relics to contradict with our efforts to build up a harmonious society and cause
(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .
(8) According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever destroying the cultural relics will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.
(9) If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our relics.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
(1)From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of destroying the cultural relics, but how we can prevent it from getting worse. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the cultural relics. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving the cultural relics somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
热点3 压力问题
一个人总在忙碌,工作压力很大,要承受很多社会的压力,包括买房子和车子
第一段
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, but also ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, , which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.(3)It goes without saying that phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our serious concerns more than . (4)Undoubtedly, the consequences resulting from this phenomenon seem to be disastrous to our individual, family and social survival and harmonious development.
第二段
(1)why do we lay emphasis on this?
(2) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when A is argued, it is B that is meant.
(3) Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened.
(4) To begin with,主题 not only does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
(5) In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with our efforts to build up a harmonious society and cause social disturbance and deterioration.
(6) Nothing is as disastrous as主题 to impose on our family financial burdens and induce the heightened concern on our parents.
(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .
(8) According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.
(9) If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .
第三段
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
(1) From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of 主题, but how we can prevent it from getting worse. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect . (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
热点 4
责任
写作题目与要求：
Study the following set of drawings carefully and write an essay in which you should
1) describe the set of drawings,
2) analyze the purpose of the painter and
3) state your position.
You should write about 160-200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20points)
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, but also ,which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, , which seems to be a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.(3)It goes without saying that phenomenon has characterized the past few years and aroused our serious concerns more than . (4)Undoubtedly, the consequences resulting from this phenomenon seem to be disastrous to our individual, family and social survival and harmonious development.
第二段
(1)why do we lay emphasis on this?
(2) To the popular mind, it is immediately assumed that when A is argued, it is B that is meant.
(3) Several points analyzed below can help us gain a better insight into what has happened.
(4) To begin with,主题 not only does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
(5) In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with our efforts to build up a harmonious society and cause social disturbance and deterioration.
(6) Nothing is as disastrous as主题 to impose on our family financial burdens and induce the heightened concern on our parents.
(7) No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the cases mentioned below .
(8) According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future.
(9) If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of .
第三段
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
(1) From what have been discussed above, what really accounts is not the danger of 主题, but how we can prevent it from getting worse. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect . (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one, our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
参考范文：
As is vividly revealed in the series of drawings above, a man has to go to four hospitals to confirm his health condition due to the irresponsibility of medical units, which seems to be humorous and funny but is most thought-provoking on second thoughts.
The aim of the painter of the drawings can be briefed as follows. To begin with, the irresponsibility in some working units can no longer be ignored by us. Accidents of various kinds resulting from irresponsibility happen more frequently than ever before. Coal mine accidents and medical accidents reported by the media are the cases in point. In the international communication, our irresponsibility has spoiled the credibility and image of our country. Responsibility does means a lot to us. What’s more, the irresponsibility of some working units should be regarded as social malignant tumor. At present the grim status contradicts our efforts to build up a harmonious society. The irresponsibility spells us heavy physical and psychological burden. And most often, the people who are frequently mistreated with irresponsibility will develop deep hatred for our society. In one word, the irresponsibility must be removed because it hinders the progress of our society.
In my view, concrete and effective measures must be taken to get rid of the phenomenon of irresponsibility. On the one hand, laws and regulations must be established to stop the existing irresponsibility. On the other hand, the importance of responsibility should be widely spread to make every citizen honor the sense of responsibility. Only in this way can we live in a safe and harmonious society. (262 words)
热点 5
Good neighbors 图画描述了两个邻居个领着一只狗,狗在互相打招呼,而人却很冷漠
As is vividly depicted in the picture, the two lonely neighbors seem to ignore each other while the two dogs greet each others politely and amiably. The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, the social interactions have been diminishing. Recently the phenomenon that lots of people love to raise the dogs while neglecting the communications between the neighbors or relatives has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of ignoring the human communications should be condemned severely or made illegal. Pet-keeping is becoming an increasingly pervasive because a pet may be a companion for old people, a friend for young couples and a playing toy for children. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势
To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several reasons have been put forward. To begin with, they are so busily scheduled that they have no time even for a drink with some friends. In addition, While there are so many dishonesties going around, they must stay with a dog, which is likely to be faithful to them. Since a pet is loyal to his master and acts as the instructions of humans, a person has no need to get along with his neighbors who may have different opinions about his or her ideas, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have once dropped wastes into the places of interests do take it seriously. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our neighbors.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；
From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the pets damaging the the relations between the neighbors. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the social contacts between neighbors. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of communications between people instead of staying with a dog alone. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later |
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